Draft and Peer Review
The Literacy Narrative draft was the draft that I received the most helpful feedback. My editors told me to do things like create a unique title for the paper, which I did and to add little words to sentences that I was missing. My editors also helped me with in-text citation errors, and works cited errors. I also had to create a header with my last name and page number that my editors instructed me to do. In other papers and works that we had to turn in, my editors did not help me much at all. I think that peer editing is helpful if the person that is editing your paper is really interested in actually helping you correct your paper. Other times that I have experience the editor did not know much about editing papers so it wasn't of any help. For the best results with peer editing you should choose a partner that actually knows how to edit a paper.
Revised Draft
The changes that I made to my project were that I added sources where they were missing and I added my own personal opinions and experience about the Student Union. I added information about the food places, which may be of much importance to the audience that is targeted in this paper, freshman because I know that is of importance to me. I also added information about the prices of the movie theater because that was missing in my paper. Another thing that I added was about the significance of the Student Union Advisory Board statement because it is important to connect that to my topic.